I searched you in the crowd,
Drivin' my eyes through every livin',
But I couldn't find you dear,
'cause it wasn't the right place...
I searched you all over the mother earth,
Like there was no more place left to search,
But I couldn't find you dear,
'cause the earth ne'er reside angels...
I searched you on the shinin' full moon,
As I gazed into my loneliness,
But I couldn't find you dear,
'cause the moon is ashamed to,when you're around...
I searched you in the heavens,
For you're the angel of my dreams,
But I couldn't find you dear,
'cause I could ne'er reach the heavens...
I searched you in the scary hell,
For my next life is there,
But I couldn't find you dear,
'cause you could ne'er reach the hell...
I couldn't find you dear,
'cause I ne'er cared to search the right place,
I ne'er knew you were here,
So close to me,at my reach...
I made a mistake,
A mistake that can ne'er be forgiven,
For I didn't search the real place,
The real place bein' my very own heart!
Drivin' my eyes through every livin',
But I couldn't find you dear,
'cause it wasn't the right place...
I searched you all over the mother earth,
Like there was no more place left to search,
But I couldn't find you dear,
'cause the earth ne'er reside angels...
I searched you on the shinin' full moon,
As I gazed into my loneliness,
But I couldn't find you dear,
'cause the moon is ashamed to,when you're around...
I searched you in the heavens,
For you're the angel of my dreams,
But I couldn't find you dear,
'cause I could ne'er reach the heavens...
I searched you in the scary hell,
For my next life is there,
But I couldn't find you dear,
'cause you could ne'er reach the hell...
I couldn't find you dear,
'cause I ne'er cared to search the right place,
I ne'er knew you were here,
So close to me,at my reach...
I made a mistake,
A mistake that can ne'er be forgiven,
For I didn't search the real place,
The real place bein' my very own heart!
3 comments:
All this while...I kept commenting you on your blogs sayin dat u cud be a poet.....
You have proven me wrong in the most disgusting way possible....
I got a headache half way thru..><
Better stick to blogging my friend.....coz poetry definitely isnt what u shud be experimenting with!!!
And this is definitely the best title for the post....
The MISTAKE....
A Gigantic One Indeed!!!!!
I still have the headache!!!...
seriously.....
Ur poetry is DEADLY!!!!....
Thanx for the comment bro...Criticism helps more than appreciations!
But i wish to say something...See the blog name and blog caption..It says it all!!!And i would have posted it in my main blog if i thought this myself a good one!!!
:)
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